Amathiphu ama-5 wokubhala indaba emfushane

La imibhalo emifushane bekulokhu kukhona. Kodwa-ke, kuze kube yiminyaka yamuva lapho, ngenxa yokuxhumana nomphakathi, izinhlobo ezinjengezindaba ezincane zivukele enkathini entsha yegolide. Izindaba zifingqiwe evesini elilodwa noma amabili evula iminyango emisha yezincwadi ezidlala ngomcabango womfundi. Futhi ngobuhle obuzama ukukhuthaza imfihlakalo ethile kepha, ngaphezu kwakho konke, ukwenza umthelela. Uma nawe usebenzisa lokhu Amathiphu ama-5 wokubhala indaba emfushane, ukunqoba kuqinisekisiwe.

Mfushane

Njengoba igama layo liphakamisa, indaba emfushane idinga ubufushane obukhulu kakhulu kunendaba. Yize izinyathelo zohlobo oluthile sezithambekele ekuhambeni kwesikhathi (ngezindaba ezithatha izigaba ezimbalwa), uhlobo lwendaba emfushane xoxa indaba enkulu ngamagama ambalwa ngangokunokwenzeka.

Landisa isimo

Kusuka engqondweni yakho iplanethi ehlala izethembiso nemicabango ebalekele ekuqothulweni kwayo. #Izincwadi ZikaYemh

Okuthunyelwe okwabiwe nguYineisy Mota (@yemh) ku

Le noveli ibonakala ngokuwandisa umqondo nokuwuphelelisa ngezinye iziqeshana, kuyilapho indaba ibuyisa isimo esithile. Uma le noveli ikhuluma ngempilo ende yomfana ofuna ukuba ngusomkhathi aze afike eNyangeni, indaba izobhala isikhathi lapho efika, noma lapho ethathe isinqumo sokundizela ezinkanyezini. I-micro-story igcwalisa umsebenzi ofanayo nendaba, kepha ngamagama ambalwa kakhulu. Ingabe mayelana landisa isimo ngaphandle kokucacisa kangako.

Sebenzisa i-ellipsis

U-Ellipsis ungumuntu oqondile oqukethe ukushiya amagama embhalweni, ngokwawo, aqondwayo. I-ally ebalulekile uma kukhulunywa ngokuvumela indaba ejulile ibe ngamavesi ambalwa. Indaba encane isebenzisa ubuqili, gcina imfihlakalo ethile ngokulandisa okufingqa ingqikithi yaleyo ndaba, kuya ngqo emvuthwandaba wayo. Isibonelo, uma abalingiswa ababili bebelokhu bebuyela emuva futhi bephula impilo yabo yonke ukuze ekugcineni babone ukuthi bayathandana, "Ngemuva kokubopha okuningi nokuqaqa, ifindo laqina kakhulu" lanele. Ngokwesibonelo.

Dlala ngamagama

Ungahle ubheke ukubhala indaba mayelana negqubu bese ukuthola kunzima ukuthola amagama akuleyo ndaba ayifingqa. Ngaleso sizathu, noma okungenani kimi, ngingaqhamuka nesithombe, esigqugquzela konke okuqukethwe sisodwa: leso sithombe sigqugquzela muphi umuzwa kuwe? Uqukethe muphi umlando? Ngezinye izikhathi, igama elilodwa linganela ukuheha labo abanye abazokwakha ngalo ukubhala. Isibonelo, "ukukhanya" kuheha amagama anjengokuthi "izibawu", "ubumnyama", "ilanga" ... Dlala nawo wonke, ngoba okokuqala, indaba emfushane ihlale yamukela izingathekiso.

Isihloko esihle

Isikhathi sokubekwa ekhaya, ngu-Omar Lara

"Hlala, ngamtshela."

Futhi ngamthinta.

Ukuthola isihloko esifanelekile somsebenzi wethu kwakuvame ukusithatha isikhathi eside kunokubhala indaba encane uqobo. Kodwa-ke, ezikhathini eziningi isihloko singagcwalisa leyo ndaba ngokungeza inani elengeziwe noma, ngisho, ngokuqeda incazelo yaso. Izibonelo, "Isikhathi esibekelwe ekhaya" esihle kakhulu.

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